Ok, Ok, so I did not finish the story that I started reading yesterday.
I finished a first draft of an expanded version of my flash fiction piece, Tyrant's Dead Hand. I do not think I was able to build suspense very well in the 500 word flash. I guess you can be the judge of that. I have hopes that the expanded 3000 word version (still a small short story) will better build suspense.
I would rather finish writing a story than finish reading one. Maybe tomorrow I will finish Fullbrim's Finding.